free Write: what if........

What if I had million dollars I would have mansions and porches and fly cars.

if i had a million do dollars i wonder what my life would be like., i would probably give some of it to my mother for all that she did for me. and i would make my ,sister my butler and my my taxi  driver. for all the years that she did to make my life bad for me. i would do a lot with a million dollars. and i would make that money by going to the NFL and getting famous and known by all. that how i would make the money. now how I'm going to spend it is a different deal.

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free write: family

I think family is a very important part of our lives. i think that because without family you would  be very lonely and sad. family helps us get through hard times that we go through in life. like if something just happened to one of your friend your family can be their to cheer you up they help and some of the older relatives  are there they can give you good advise on life and things that they have went through them selves. they are good to be around and i know that they always have my back when i need them the most.

but my family can be annoying sometimes because they always want to bother me like my Lil cousin, and my sister when I'm in ma room watching t.v its either her or him that wants to come in my room and bother me. when I'm sleep she comes in and cut the  lights on and jump on the bed.