Monday, February 23, 2009

free Write: what if........

What if I had million dollars I would have mansions and porches and fly cars.
if i had a million do dollars i wonder what my life would be like., i would probably give some of it to my mother for all that she did for me. and i would make my ,sister my butler and my my taxi  driver. for all the years that she did to make my life bad for me. i would do a lot with a million dollars. and i would make that money by going to the NFL and getting famous and known by all. that how i would make the money. now how I'm going to spend it is a different deal.

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